Frozen fields retire

Frozen fields retire

Beside abandoned car lots

Bumper to bumper

Where horns and caws call alike

And breathe condense and vapor


3 thoughts on “Frozen fields retire

  1. This is excellent. A marvelous mix of the ancient tanka with the modern car lot. It isn’t often one reads such a successful blend of the two. I do wish you would share some of this work at dVerse, get more viewpoints for your work. It isn’t often we get to see these Japanese forms except through my writung and of course, the wretched faux-ku. This coming Thursday is an open link where there are no prompts but a person can submit whatever they choose.

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